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| Norton High softball girls preparing for the big game |
The Opposing team, Fairhaven fought back with just as much intesnsity. They appeared confident but couldn't seem to get a good enough hit off of the ball. By the 5th inning, Fairhaven seemed to be getting tired but kept the swings comming. "They held us very well" said Cobotti. Norton and Fairhaven were neck and neck, until the lucky hit that gave Norton their one point lead. "In the end we ended up with the run we needed to pull through with a win", Taylor Cibotti.
"It was an exciting, yet nerve wrecking game." said Taylor Cibotti, sophomore at Norton High. The season for the Norton High softball team has been a long one but they continue to fight for the win. The girls have worked together all season long to stay in the competition. "No one expected us to come into this season and do such a good job, but we showed them." said senior, captain, Kylie Barrows. As a captain, Kylie helped lead her team to victory.
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| Norton High softball team after the victory |
The outfield remained on their toes ready for any ball throughout the whole game. And the infield was prepared for anything as well. They had a very strong defense but when it came to offense, it was their week point. "We just need to work on our offense and hitting the ball more" said Arcaro. Leah Buttner, Norton High sophmore, gave some incite to her thoughts on the game as well, "We played an awesome defense and did what we needed to in order to win and will continue to work hard". The girls know their weaknesses and strengths, and believe in themselves. That allows them to help each other push past their limits to better their playing as individuals and as a whole.


Hi Carlie,
ReplyDeleteReview your notes on "leads" or "ledes" (notes). Your intro to the article should reflect those tips. Also, review for some spelling and grammar errors ("exciting"). In your third paragraph, save your conclusion sentence for the conclusion sentence of the essay-- you don't want to congratulate the win and then go back to talking about the outfielders. Also, avoid praising a team. Review the "10 Tips for Scholastic Sports Writing." Additionally, review the rubric in detail.
Rough Draft Grade: 95/100